Thank you! And I'm actually American. I was sadly not given a good education so my grammar wasn't so great at the time; but since then I have moved to a better state where I got the proper education that I was severely lacking in.
I truly appreciate the honesty, I know there are some things on the story that I could do better. But I just started coding and it was surprisingly hard working with the story, even with my mistakes, I am happy on how it turned out for my first time making a game.