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they are planning on quarterly updates so every three months. this just came out a few days ago for 0.1. so you have three months ish.

more likely the plot involves a deadly secret when excommunicated from the game. seems to follow a lot better than being stressed.

if it did, then just skip through on a second playthrough and make different choices.

sounds good. quarterly updates sounds fine.

About how long do you estimate your development update periods will be and how long do you estimate this will take you to complete? I'm guessing it would be a much easier thing to answer now that you already completed a game and can compare the amount of content.

I am not a furry nor do i usually play VN's but to tell the truth i thoroughly enjoyed the current demoed story line. some of the grammar and spelling made me laugh but i could not scoff at the raw emotion that the music and setting conveyed. the characters were genuine and understandable. 

*spoilers from here on*

the dream sequence was very good. while cliche, the dream sequence definitely puts the player in her shoes when it comes to her worries and fears. the foreshadowing of her true enemy is incredibly strong though. most people would be able to devise a great deal of the plot from the dream sequence alone, and that can dampen some player's enjoyment of your story. well as far as the demo goes that is. Not sure how many twists and turns lie beyond. Once the dream sequence started, I knew exactly what was going on and i knew how that sequence would end as well. while i still fully enjoyed the sequence, i do wish it was a bit more subtle. overall 8/10. which is really good.

also if you need someone to review grammar and spelling in your narration I would be more than happy to help you.