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Looks promising to me. Please keep going with it. I want to see how this develops. I’ll be keeping an eye on it.

Yes, you can. But you can phrase it as a question or a polite request rather than the passive aggressive way you wrote it. I have nothing against your preference. It’s just not the best way to phrase it in my opinion. However, if you choose not to be receptive to my opinion in any way, I’m not going to cry over it. Carry on and enjoy your life fellow reader. Best wishes.

This is beyond rude. The author writes at their own pace. Don’t mock them for it.

The author will write what they want to write. Deal with it.

femininity and masculinity are a spectrum so it’s not really clear what that would entail anyway and there are certain things that would be offensive to people if automatically assumed feminine based on any person’s own individual definition of feminine. Long story short: that is something that is very divisive and not something that can be implemented very easily. Sorry but by catering to your interests, the author easily could be going against the interests of others. I don’t care either way, I’m okay with whatever the author decides but strong opinions do exist.

a new chapter. Hooray!

To all the dislikes, are you disliking just because this person is NB? If so, that’s terrible. Let people be who they are. Inclusivity is good for everyone. Everyone deserves to play IF games. If someone wants something changed on the NB path, why do you care if you’re not NB?

Don’t listen to them Alahria. They only speak for themselves. You can’t please everyone but you’ve pleased most people including me. Their one comment stands on its own. The rest of us don’t feel this way. Keep writing the great way you write.

I think it’s a great concept and will be even better when you develop it further. Once the story takes place, it will grow even more engaging. Please keep going at a pace you feel comfortable. If you stop now, you’ll never know what it could have been.

I think it’s a great concept and will be even better when you develop it further. Once the story takes place, it will grow even more engaging. Please keep going at a pace you feel comfortable. If you stop now, you’ll never know what it could have been.

you have to turn cheat mode on