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I know this project is dead but its Ahri not Ahree

Well I understand my point came off a little more hateful then I wanted it to. So I wanted to at least make sure the creator didnt think I was trying to insult his work.

Edit: I notice you are the creator and id like to add that saying a vn is having too much edge and over the top drama is valid criticism. Comparing it to a wattpad fanfic in terms of the format of the writing is also valid. If you read my reply you would see I tried to explain it better 

I even said that I didnt judge it based on the writing sense it was ment to be quick and wasn’t supposed to have a hard emphasis on story even saying it was paced well for what it is. 

then saying that if you wanted to make it into a novel (which it has a lot of room to become one) then you would need to fix some of the writing issues with the story and pace it differently but other then that it has a lot of potential.

I dont know why you call that backhanded criticism, and then ask me to not comment. Im like the only comment of criticism on this form. and I didnt even say your vn was bad.

I dont know who you think you are to tell me what I can and cant do, but even the creator said he understood my criticism. So I will continue talking on this thread, sense the creator doesnt have a problem with me

thanks!

I love that when people talk about people downvoting something because its against their opinion the first thing that comes to mind is fbtw LOL.

As someone who has been in the furry vn community for about 2 years there is a shit tone of storys that have some of the worst writing in the world, but you constantly hear "OMG THE WRITING IS SO GOOD IT MADE ME CRY" despite the pacing is garbage and the story makes no sense. But  that one hot wolf daddy makes everyone assume the story is god tier cause hes hot and flirts with the mc 24/7. The community could care less about good writing and more about if the art is good. And tbh most writers in the furry vn community have forgotten that to make a good romance you have to ACTUALLY PACE THE PLOT AND BUILD UP RELATIONSHIPS. And when they do make relationships they are always borderline abusive with stuff like "He wont let me talk to anyone" or another toxic traits. 

Its kinda sad how furry vns have gotten. 

Iv been in the furry VN community for about 2 years, these horny young adults will down vote and hate on anyone who doesnt praise what they love.

the only reason I compared it to wattpad fanfic was because of a lot of unnecessary edge and over the top drama and instant rushes to horny but…

 I didnt really judge this vn on its writing because it wasnt ment to be a long in depth vn which I respect that. And the pacing was just fine for it. I think it has a lot of potential to be something more if you wanted to go down that path (You just might have to cut back on the edge alittle) but overall I thought everything else about the vn was good!

Im going to be honest the writing is literally in the format of a wattpad fanfic full of moments of lots of edge, constant over the top sad moments. 

While the writing isnt great that was never the point of the vn  to be a big lengthy thing (at the moment if it was it would need a lot of work on the writing and would have to be paced differently). 

I genuinely think the vn is great and would recommend checking it out because the art is amazing. It paces itself well for what it is! Not to mention the great soundtrack