First of all, the art is AMAZING, the background are beautiful, it looks and feels calming, the colors are so pretty, the music is pretty good, would listen to it during class lol, and the characters oh man *chefs kiss*. The writing is pretty good, I love how you can tell that something is happening with the subtly, though the story was a bit confusing to go with on the first run. I like how you added alot of things in the settings, really helps.
I can tell there was alot of effort put into this, and it turned out great, amazing work on this game, hope yall get the attention yall deserve!