after a reread, i think i only have 2 main ideas:
A) how/where to start after the character creation (things like blank page syndrome)
B) adding a PDF table of contents (unless my browser is the issue lmao.)
but i still think you're solid either way!
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i may or may not have made an account to comment that this was unbelievably cute omg?
the art is also super cute. i really love the style too, i always had to look at the expressions then down at the text.
i was also pleasantly surprised at just being able to read/enjoy the story, not needing to make any choices (first itch.io game and i was scared it'd be a game game with the save option lmao)
i actually liked that it's short! really nice break from other stuff i'm doing in my life without burning too much of my time. that's why i haven't touched any games here before, so im glad i clicked this one first!
and it's just a very soft story overall. i'm soft for them (*/ω\*) a good first itch.io experience, thank you for them <3