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riking28

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Review: nicely written.

This conception of smart home assistants is a helpful "bright future". A lot of plot time is spent on bringing knowledge of "transgender exists" to the new world, and yes the two girls get to meet up at the end.

I appreciated that the story "knows when to stop" and resists the scope creep of becoming a full on First Contact story.

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epub doesn't reflow on phone :( see redacted screenshot

Edit: docx is working fine! Just need to lock out accidental edits somehow...

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For someone familiar with the setting, this is an enjoyable longer-form work. With compelling original worldbuilding, multiple plot movements, and a satisfying conclusion, this isekai Korpsigin was an entertaining read.

We can accomplish amazing things together, all it takes is a little help from your friends 馃挏

Kylie and Naomi are very cute together. Here's to many more years of happy travels!

It's nice to get more development of the world around Rodehills.

And the rest of my comments are spoilers :)

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So. "Conversion issues" may be underselling it. Try "major OCR errors such as missing letters".

Even after al  these years

You should be able to open the .epub like a .zip file, edit the words inside, and zip it back up.

(Reading the PDF version on my phone instead for now, the words per line is more than I'd like (for a phone) but still tolerable.)

I don't see a purchase button?

Excellent story, I've read it a few times now 馃挋