What a pleasant read! Impressive first build, music and artwork is on point too. Glad to be along for this ride.
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The increase in quality from the first build was very noticeable. Good job! Hope to see more improvements in the future.
Also a technical thing: The game's file size got surprisingly big. It seems the music track "to_stars" and the sound effect of the shower are several hours long and are hundreds of MBs.
Really liked how the main character was written. His panicked state felt quite believable. The art is good, Hercule having so many expressions was a really nice touch. Just wish the main menu had artwork as well.
I hope you'll find an editor for the English version, because that's something the novel could benefit from.
Hello!
I finished chapter 1 recently. I managed to do it without relying on Mate and without hacking. It took a very, very long time - but it felt great to finally overcome the challenge!
My strategy was to get good enough in the first two phases so as to not get hit at all, and hope that I somehow survive the third. I'll be honest, I can't even see safe spots in the third phase most of the time.
I would love to try going for not taking damage, but it feels so hopeless. Could you possibly give a video demonstration?
I really enjoy your game, I'm looking forward to the rest!
I only noticed 2 typos. Hope it's okay to list them:
https://imgur.com/a/9c7PrcC
"Assuming I'm alive in the first place: can't really throw away a life I don't have." - a haunting line I'll remember forever.
A fantastic premise that's handled with the right amount of care such topics require. This first chapter is a great introduction to your characters.
Loved to get inside Isaac's mind, to see them react to everything: their situation, to others, and to the world around them.
A unique visual style with a fantastic soundtrack.
Best VN I've read this year. Eagerly looking forward to the entire story!
Hello! I loved your game!
Please allow me to point out 2 bugs, both located in the 'maze' room. Examining the upper-left vent 3 times with English language leads to this:
And here's one with the leftmost box in the middle. When examined 2 times the text is incorrect for the English version!
(also, I'd be very grateful if you could give a hint to solve decryption.txt)(I'm really bad with puzzles.)
After playing the demo and reading the character bios on the kickstarter page, I would like to congratulate you for the fact that Aster seems to be a very well done main character.
Most of the time eroge protagonists have the personality of a paper bag, but Aster's presence added a lot to the demo. His backstory is intriguing and he appears to be a dutiful, capable person. I'd really like to learn more about him during the different routes. And the girls too of course, but that's obvious.
Also looking forward to doing office work. That's such an unusual thing to include. You have my support.