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Thank you for the feedback!! That map definitely took longer than I had hoped, but happy with the result!

Others commenters are spot on, though I needed to mention your ability to layer in a sense of humor and whimsy while keeping it challenging / interesting was really impressive. 

A small detail, but sticks with me: the very light grey background image on the left side pages dials your design cohesiveness up to 11. It all reads so clear. Well done!

The “any hex map” flexibility is such a nice touch. I personally had to consult a dictionary a couple times, but still found the descriptions clear and  table ready. Nice work!

I love this concept of incorporating musical elements, especially with a bard-less party. The artwork style and it’s consistent use throughout is a great addition to the overall vibe as well!

Very clean layout and easy to follow writing style. I also like the ratio of friendlies to enemies; reinforces the notoriety of this dangerous place. 

Thank you!! 🙏 

Thanks! Actually looking forward to a play test to see how well it works 😅

Thank you so much! 

Went into this unsure what to expect, but I now fully agree with others - layout, cohesiveness, clarity of detail are all on point. So well done! 

Such a creative way to tie those covers together. Also, AI or not, I'm smitten with those isometric city maps. Nice work!

Hey thanks! Very much appreciated!

Your use of clean layout and formatting elements really helps navigate the wealth of content in here. The split-personality mechanism (using the character background to convey the difference) is such a great thread to connect the NPC histories to the PCs experience. Well done!

Great work on this! It reads so clearly front to back and the first page narrative does an amazing job setting the scene.