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> 10. Magic Circles: Archetypes that can channel magic can change circles through

Thank you so much!

Awesome! I appreciate it! :)

Do you think you could make a PDF version of this? I have a terrible time reading large amounts of text on a screen, and I like to print things out so I can actually read them.

I've paid much more money for much less complete products. What you've made is good and well worth the price. It seems like you're holding yourself to an incredibly high standard. I've been there. Perfectionism and imposter syndrome are horrible curses. You've obviously put in a lot of work, and you deserve to get paid for that work. It will take some time to accept, but "good enough" is, in fact, good enough. Perfection is rarely necessary, and most won't even be able to tell the difference between your "good enough" and your "perfect".

If someone requests a refund, go ahead and give it to them, but there's no reason to refund everyone.

Good luck, mate. I'm rooting for ya.

...does Rico wear a red ring?

Hell yeah!!

Damn. Let me counter it with some positive feedback!

It's a really slick system that combines a lot of my favorite elements of other RPGs! And it's so professionally laid out! I am definitely going to use it for the next fantasy game I run. The only thing it really lacks is more content! A larger bestiary, random tables for generating locations, dungeons and NPCs... and it'd pretty much be the perfect rpg! Although all that could easily be in a supplement. You could go the Mothership route, and continue giving the core book away for free while selling supplements for it. :)

Update it every hour for the next 6 years, I don't care! I've already printed 3 copies and I'll probably buy the print version too 😎

I would love to listen to this podcast, but it is very difficult to hear what you're saying over the music most of the time. :/

I did too. :x