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Thanks! Yeah, the piece is all over the place at times, I feel the same way. I plan to make multiple songs out of these little parts

Amazing! Definitely 5/5 for composition. This may be a basic review, but I simply love everything about the piece, it seems so full (I strive to write something like this...) Other comments have mentioned this, however I do agree that a brighter piano would've been better. Either way I loved it!

I love that intense mysterious intro! Throughout most of the piece, it has this comfortable ambient feel, I could definitely see this being in a game. However at times it becomes repetitive, maybe switch it up with jumping to different octaves? That's one simple suggestion, there is a lot you could do. Great work, I enjoyed it!

I love that arpeggio opening leading into the dissonant chords. my favorite part is from 0:25 - 1:00, the chords with delay pair really well with the bouncy melody and makes it sound really nice! My only critique would be that at times the chords can sound muddy because they are layering over each other. Other than that, great work.

While I love most of the transitions and the contrast of parts, I do agree that some of the transitions could be changed. Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you for your feedback!

Thanks! the descending (yeah its chromatic) part is also my favorite, when I continue writing this piece I will definitely expand that part.

Thank you! I do see that I need to improve the volume, I'm going to continue writing this piece after I get feedback and will definitely try messing with the volume. I wish I could've developed the ending more but I ran out of time D:

Resubmitted the video with better audio quality + higher volume

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I never realized how quiet the youtube video was compared to the mp3. I might try to resubmit with a different video.

Yo, I'm soop. I am an aspiring videogame music composer. I can write in a plethora of styles, whether it be energetic, melodic, etc. and I'm looking to improve my music through working with others.

Discord: soo_per

Email: supergoodatgames@gmail.com

Hi! I compose music and am looking to expand my skills. I'd love to incorporate/change my music composition to fit the needs of other's work.

Discord: soo_per 

Email: supergoodatgames@gmail.com