I really loved the presentation, the placement of text, and the squiggly drawings... this is a really cool VN. I also really liked how the relationship between the two girls. When Kate starts to panic after Sarah touches her... that moment really resonated with me.
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LOVED the writing in this, I thought it did a great job of creeping up and showing exactly what type of person Sara is, from every single head-hit, and culminating when she is finally labeled an asshole. I hate her, but I am her ... this game does a great job of showing a vision of a dark future, making me jump up from bed like Ebenezer Scrooge and swear to change my ways!
I really appreciate the feedback, I was trying to get a stylistic font that was also readable but...well I'm no expert so I deeply appreciate what you've said. Readability is really important!!
And thanks again, glad you enjoyed! I will say this is definitely our best project so far haha but hopefully the past stuff won't disappoint either!
I wrote up a detailed guide to get Vivi's good end here: https://noasdev.tumblr.com/post/729386878161272832/vivi-good-end-guide Hope this helps!
LOVE the atmosphere, very enjoyable!! I love the low poly style and I love that the fish were almost believable (well, most of them...)!
I think I got softlocked at the grouper because I exited out of aquarium view after the jumpscare and then when I went back to feed it, it wouldn't appear no matter what :( so I couldn't feed the last fish either :( But I loved the game!!!