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Shadowclans death
Chapter 1
LET ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER BENEATH THE HIGHROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING Snowstar called form the Highrock Dragonwing,with his apprentice Unicornpaw and Snowfur,Flywing and their kits followed them to the Highrock, “sit with me little ones” Snowfur and Flywing mewed to their kits, “ok” the kits replied and and sat with their mother. Bluefur and his apprentice Redpaw and Tigerheart,Lepordheart and the rest of the warriors all came up to the Highrock. “We will start this greenleaf with a new warrior with us today” Snowstar began.”glitter wing are you sure that your apprentice is ready to become a warrior”, She meowed. “I do” glitterwing replied in a powerful and good meaning. “Snowpaw please step forward” She meowed. Snowpaw stepped up to the Highrock. “I Snowstar, leader of Shadowclan call upon my warrior ancestors to look down at this apprentice, she has trained to understand our ways of our noble code, and I command her a warrior in her turn, Snowpaw, do you promise to defend your clan even with the cost of your life”. There was a short silence after Snowpaw replied back “I do”. “Then by the power of starclan I shall give your warrior name, Snowpaw from this moment on you shall be known as Snowheart, Starclan honors your courage, strength and the creativity of your heart, and we welcome you as a full warrior of Shadowclan”. Snowstar jumped down from the Highrock to touch noses with the new warrior Snowheart and rested her tail tip on her shoulder, and everyone in the clearing shouted her new name, “SnowHeart SnowHeart SnowHeart”. “This meeting is now dismissed”, Everyone from the clearing disappeared into their dens but some were going to the freshkill pile, And then the deputy Purplespots was about to call for a patrol but realized that it might be too early for a patrol right now so she just went to the leaders den. Snowkit,Bluekit,BlackKit,SmallKit and Rabbitkit were all just playing with the moss ball that Snowfur curled up for them to stop being too noisy. There was a long silence until Snowfur meowed, “hey um do you want me to get some fish kill from the fresh kill pile Flywing?”, “Sure” Flywing meowed back. Snowfur went out of the nursery and went up to the fresh kill pile, and sniffed the prey one at a time to decide and then she spotted a mouse, so she grabbed the mouse and started to bound toward the nursery again. “ Here you go Flywing, Snowfur meowed. “Thank you,” Flywing replied. LameHeart headed for the medicine cat's den to make sure that her kit’s were arriving, when she emerged into the medicine cat den she did not see Unicornpaw or her mentor dragonwing so before she was about to leave Dragonwing came out from far from the darkness. “Gretting’s Lameheart” Dragonwing said, then Unicornpaw emerged from the back of the den. “Do you need something, Lameheart?” Unicornpaw said. “Um Yes i do actually” lameheart meowed to Unicornpaw “ Um … I just came to check on my kits”. “Ok but I told you to see me in a week not two moons ago” Dragonwing meowed to Lameheart, “ And I came, what do you expect me to do? Wait until my stomach hurts and then come to the medicine den.” Lameheart hissed. “ Alright lay down and let me check” Lameheart did as the medicine cat told her to do. She layed down and let the medicine cat put a paw around her belle, Dragonwing did a careful check to see how long it would take the kits to come until he felt little tiny kits in Lameheart’s belle. Then Dragonwing replied “You have kits in your belle but it might take a few days for the kits to get delivered but you are so close to being kitted so go to the nursery today and come back when you think the kits need to be born”. “Ok Thank you for everything Dragonwing”, “no problem I am a Medicine cat after all”. Lameheart started to come out of the medicine cat den and headed for the nursery and went into the nursery.”What are you doing here in the nursery Lameheart you do not have kits”? Snowfur meowed “ the medicine cat told me to come in the nursery because I am so close to kitting”, Lameheart replied “ oh that makes sense, The moss is over there for you to sleep while you are in here and waiting for your kits”. “Thank you Snowfur”, “No problem, anything for my clanmate”. Flameheart went to where Snowfur pointed to where the moss was with her tail.
Mine is 22 chapters long so this is just the first one but I am working on the rest of the chapters and plus I first wrote this on paper
Shadowclans Death
Chapter 1
LET ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER BENETH THE HIGHROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING Snowstar called form the high rock Dragonwing,with his apprentice Unicornpaw and Snowfur,Flywing and their kits followed them to the Highrock, Bluefur and his apprentice Redpaw and Tigerheart,Lepordheart and the rest of the warriors all came up to the Highrock. “We will start this greenleaf with a new warrior with us today” Snowstar began. “Snowpaw plese step fowrad” She meowed. Snowpaw steped up to the Highrock. “I Snowstar, leader of Shadowclan call upon my warrior ancestors to look down at this apprentice, she has trained to understand our ways of our noble code, and I comade her a warrior in turn, Snowpaw, do you promise to defend your clan even with the cost of your life”. There was a short silence after Snowpaw replied back “I do”. “Then by the power of starclan I sall give your warrior name, Snowpaw from this moment on you sall be known as Snowheart, Starclan honors your courage, strength and the creativity of your heart, and we welcome you as a full warrior of Shadowclan”. Snowstar jupped down from the Highrock to touch noses with the new warrior Snowheart and rested her tail tip on her shoulder, and everyone in the shouted her new name, “SnowHeart SnowHeart SnowHeart”. “This meeting is now dismissed”, Everyone from the clearing disappeared into their dens but some were going to the freshkill pile, And then the deputy Purplespots was about to call for a patrol but relized that it might be too early for a patrol right now so she just went to the leaders den. Snowkit,Bluekit,Blackkit.Smallkit and Rabbitkit were all just playing with the mossball that Snowfur curled up for them to stop being too noisy. There was a long silence until Snowfur meowed, “hey um do you want me to get some fesh kill from the fresh kill pile Flywing”, “Sure” Flywing meowed back. Snowfur went out of the nursery and went up to the fresh kill pile, and sniffed the prey one at a time to decide and then she spotted a mouse, so she grabbed the mouse and started to bound toward the nursery again. “ Here you go Flywing, Snowfur meowed. “Thank you,” Flywing replied. LameHeart headed for the medicine cat's den to make sure that her kit’s were arriving, when she emerged into the medicine cat den she did not see Unicornpaw or her mentor dragonwing so before she was about to leave Dragonwing came out from far from the darkness. “Gretting’s Lameheart” Dragonwing said, then Unicornpaw emerged from the back of the den. “Do you need something Lameheart” Unicornpaw said. “Um Yes i do actually” Lameheart mewoed to Unicornpaw “ Um … I just came to check on my kits”. “Ok but I told you to see me in a week not two moons ago” Dragonwing meowed to Lameheart, “ And I came, what do you expect me to do? Wait until my stomach hurts and then come to the medicine den.” Lameheart hissed. “ Alright lay down and let me check” Lameheart did as the medicine cat told her to do. She layed down and let the medicine cat put a paw around her belle, Dragonwing did a careful check to see how long it would take the kits to come until he felt little tiny kits in Lameheart’s belle. Then Dragonwing replied “You have kits in your belle but it might take a few days for the kits to get delivered but you are so close to being kitted so go to the nursery today and come back when you think the kits need to be born”. “Ok Thank you for everything Dragonwing”, “no problem I am a Medicine cat after all”. Lamheart started to come out of the medicine cat den and headed for the nursery and went into the nursery.”What are you doing here in the nursery Lamheart you do not have kits”? Snowfur meowed “ the medicine cat told me to come in the nursery because I am so close to kitting”, Lameheart replied “ oh that makes sense, The moss is over there for you to sleep while you are in here and waiting for your kits”. “Thank you Snowfur”, “No problem, anything for my clanemate”. Lameheart went to were Snowfur pointed to where the moss was with her tail.