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I've got to give props to the comedy writing in this game. I had more than a few laughs playing through the current build - which is high praise from me as someone who finds comedy in VN typically cringe. Scribbles is my favorite so far. I love his brand of sass

wow, that update held no punches. Im truely impressed by how the sex scene was implemented into the story; it has shown me that the story presented is actually trying to stand out within the genre by having essentially any amount of meaningful commentary present in a scene thats typically just horny fanservice in similar vn. Caelans naivety has certainly gotten more and more frustrating to me, but as a depiction of a trusting person, his thoughts and motivations are logically sound and im interested in seeing how he copes with losing essentially everyone he knows. Honestly, as the chapters release, my impression of the game has only grown more positive. I think FBtW will certainly stand out amongst similar games - it does already.

Edit: just to be clear, i like caelans character. A wimpy, naive kid that bumbles around a tribe desentigrating from political strife is kind of an interesting circumstance. Also somewhat comical as is pretty clear to everyone but caelan that hes in extreme danger constantly, but he skips around like a school girl.

whiterain in the tavern at night

I’m glad you’ve decided to pursue a more linear style of VN. I think a lot of authors get really caught up in the ambitious “player” choice driven story which usually ends up more polarizing rather than personal 😂. There’s a reason great narratives aren’t asking you to try and change a bunch of shit. Good luck bro 

I thought we were supposed to think he was just another gay friend b/c of how he stands till mc says hes "straight" lol