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I have been awaiting this update with eagerness as Chasing Sunsets is a top three AVN for me - truly outstanding overall. But despite its many strengths, I was disappointed with the update in one regard. My one, significant, gripe is that the open relationship track leads to Mallory withdrawing from the love relationship with the MC (right after a flaming hot play date that she arranges!). She and Jaye are "getting closer", they both know about each other's relationship with the MC and both deeply love and trust him. The MC has just saved Mallory's (and Jaye's) life and has reconnected her with her lost puppy, on top of helping her with her other childhood traumas and the health of her childhood friend! Why don't the three of them ever sit down together and discuss the issue? Maybe work it out? As you write the story, tthey all, and especially the MC, lack the emotional intelligence to talk it out and make it work. I realize that this track would have required extra work for a story that has taken 3 years to date, but I was very disappointed at you closing out this possibility - especially based on a decision made several chapters earlier.