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Just picked it up. Had a good time playing it. Hope you make more like it.

I'm not a fan of AI but dev has won me over in their particular instance. They are starting to desine by request and it keeps looking smooth.

Fantastic job rolling out excellent updates! 

Few questions/slash requests:

Can the different clothes be incorporated into more sexual activity? ex; Pose option unlocks after collecting all toys and all clothes -> 'Go Wild' and she grabs a random toy and wrecks herself.

I love the progression of pure vs slut. It feels like a skewed version of corruption where regardless of her poise, she's still sexually open. 

Fiona

Re-impregnate: Fiona is aggressively trying to get pregnant. She asks MC to do a beach day with her and while he is getting changed, sneaks in and jumps on him while his back is turn. Both of them fall on the bed, She tears his shorts off and proceeds to give him a sloppy bj while she fondles her loins above his face, dripping down on him. Once she's satisfied with his rigidity, she sits in MC's lap, facing him and alternating between kissing and cleaning his face with her tongue. After climaxing, MC tries to get up but Fiona continues thrusting her hips down. Fiona tells him that if he wants to do anything else, he'll need to carry her around. 

Actions -

• Fiona to MC -> blowjob, deepthroat, masturbation, sitting and standing sex

Sarah

Thought about this and the scenes could be reversable. Happy for feedback.

First Impregnate: MC goes to the bathroom in the middle of the night. When he goes back to bed, he finds Sarah in his bed. In the low light, Sarah sits up and sweetly confesses her love and thanks MC for all he has done. She proceeds to slowly and tenderly approach MC, almost acting motherly. After climaxing, MC goes to the kitchen for something to drink and Sarah is gone when he returns. (she sleepsexing)

Actions -

• Sarah to MC -> Worship (cock and all), kissing, handjob, breastfeed, soft missionary

Re-impregnate: Sarah barges into MC's room, waking him up and blaming him and his dick for her being an emotional mess. She goes on an angry rant that he needs to be more considerate of her while slapping his member and stepping on his chest. She sits in his lap and squeezes his balls and grips the base of his penis, making her hands into a cockring. She grinds on his while yelling at how sometimes he can act so 'useless'. She quickly gets herself too exctied to stop and slides onto him. During sex, she starts yelling at him to hold her hands behind her back and pull her hair. After sex, she storms out in a huff.

Actions - 

• Sarah to MC -> Rage Doming, light physical pain, edging, spooning sex

Catherine

For first impregnate: She leans into the naughty milf mentality and serves MC a naughty breakfast dressed in a slutty maid outfit until she finally servers herself 'the main course'.

Actions - 

• Catherine to MC-> Blow job, boob job, breast feed (after boob job?), cowgirl

Re-impregnate: MC goes to take a shower and finds Catherine already in the bath wondering what sort of impact birth is having on her body. He listens to her voice her worries to herself before interrupting her in a grand show of love and lust, stating that he loves all the changes and it only makes her hotter. Catherine again leans into her momentary mindset fueled by lust and offers MC backdoor action if he doesn't think she is tight enough. She rationalizes by pointing out she 'just cleaned everything'. 

Actions - 

• MC to Catherine -> go down front and back, fingering (fisting?)

• Catherine to MC -> anal, a2m, breast milk shower before oral, prone with ass up sex

I really like what you're doing and am very envious that you're just diving in. I'll happily bug hunt for you if that helps you keep momentum.

Interesting start but if I explore instead of going to bed, I'm locked in the bathroom while the texts changes. Its the same regardless of doing the prologue or not. To make the scenes work, I have to 'explore' and go straight to the living room and then to olivia's room. If I visit other rooms in any other order, olivia is waiting in the living room and the pictures lock.

Great start thought, l like the design and writing so far.

Just gave it a play and really enjoyed it. Since everyone else is posting their wishlists, I guess I'll do the same. 

Technically, I'd like:

• The highlight delay when mousing over objects to be more responsive. 
• Scene transitions to be just a touch faster. While the game is fun, it felt like there was a lot of waiting to click at the start of a new day or evening.

Artistically, I'd like:

• The character faces to also represent the expression on the picture. I enjoy that the character continues to talk over the pictured activity. The differing looks create a slight disconnect when I see them flatly talking in the background. 
• Before I go any further, HUGE KUDOS to the design of the clothes and different poses for each set. In the studio, all options should get the same level of engagement that the clothes do. If you 'wanna have fun', give the model a choice ranging from cute -> seductive -> slutty for the corresponding actions. Also, getting to incorporate the clothes into sex or toys would be great.
• This might just be me, but I'd love color indicative choices. Ex: Lewd responses= pink, Standard responses = blue, Agressive responses = red. In other games, it just kicks of a mental cue that makes me curious to explore other dialogue.

Character/Writing that I would like to see:

• The ending scenes do not feel like a reward for engaging those characters. I'm a writer myself and I was a little shocked at how the endings tried to tie up the story for a nice little 'completion'.
• Give each character a starmaker path. This creates a massive amount of oportunities to highlight differences between characters while showcasing strengths and insecurities. You can create colabs between people and have more reasons to spend your ever increasing fortune. Studio getting a little crowded? Buy a building. The biggest one I'm seeing other people bring up is a mesh of activity between Anna and Samantha. Thats brilliant. I'd write the fuck out of that.
• Lastly, I know its already been touched on, but the corruption characteristics could be dialed way up and for everyone.
  Ex: Groping - what? no -> mmm, should stop -> Yes like that (at this point could trigger sex in private) -> I need it (trigger sex anywhere and public) -> secret unlock. Each of those responses could be locked behind an activity or gift requiring other actions and so forth. 
  I know the character progression is already similar as to what I've suggested, so its not anything unique, I'd just like it to be more tangible with clear shifts that might make the player go, 'oooh'.