Turns out I had just already talked to her last month. Anyway, I’ve finished the game. It was an enjoyable experience!! Since you are still working on the game, I suggest adding more stuff/quests to do in the later chapters of the game, especially the 4th and 5th because having only main quests starts to feel really hollow.
Also, I had already learnt about the history of demons in the Royal Library before entering the 4th temple, so it was pretty obvious where the story was going reading the inscriptions inside, yet Erica acted like she didn’t know who was at war with humans, who were created by Byr, etc, so I think you should change it to Erica realising it right away (but perhaps slowly, to not jump to conclusions, and to confirm her suspicion) that Shapeshifters were related to Demons, if the player has already read about them in the library.
I wonder if you’re planning to add the coastal town to the East of Solina to the explorable map as well, I think it might be interesting (and perhaps more fulfilling) to explore the whole map.
I also want to mention that the Catching the Mastermind quest about the outcasts was not in the walkthrough, since I was stuck trying to figure out how to escape (had to come here for the solution after thinking I am stuck, like another commenter).
After completing the game, I looked for any things I missed in the walkthrough, it turns out there’s a whole Beatrix/vampiress path I didn’t find? Where was she? It doesn’t mention in the walkthrough where to find her as well. And the old guy at night at the Bazaar could sell you special items? Whenever I tried seeing what he had to offer, Erica always just said that she shouldn’t look at his shady wares without good reason. Also couldn’t find a locked house in the residential district to sneak into as a mouse.
Overall, I think it’s pretty nice game! It will be interesting to see what you add in Zanark for the library and in Golden Leaf to complete the Turning a New Leaf quest. How about letting the players shapeshift wherever freely if they choose to disclose everything about the shapeshifters? I didn’t complete the book before finishing the game so I don’t know what really happens if you do that, but I think it’s be cool to just transform whenever and see people’s funny reactions!