"... I considered adding a third route: one where you’re with both Asami and her mother. But such a choice would undoubtedly come with complications. Maybe we’ll organize a poll about it?..."
I hope you do make that third route, you can never have enough oyakodon. It'd give her friend/love/corruption routes... maybe involving those drugs featured earlier? Such a route would likely be only available if you corrupted the daughter too...
To quote a different reply I made: "...if you do buy here rather than the Patreon, always keep in mind how itch calculates your purchase: The money you spent is your tier. As in if you buy a game 50% off for $5, you can't download the $10 normal price one when it's no longer on sale. Weird I know, but that's how this site works."
If that's the reason you can't download, then it's Itch doing it.
I enjoy it, but if you'd rather a more complete game then probably better to wait for a later release.
Though if you do buy here rather than the Patreon, always keep in mind how itch calculates your purchase: The money you spent is your tier. As in if you buy a game 50% off for $5, you can't download the $10 normal price one when it's no longer on sale. Weird I know, but that's how this site works.
Good start, good models... interesting to see where it goes.
Though, I hope in later versions you expand on the premise. You're obviously basing things on the anime, but you shouldn't feel too restricted by that. For example you could give the girls "Love/Lust points" that we can earn through dialogue choices that they like, which can lead down later story paths. Perhaps through earning such things during the Yuuma date we can end up fooling around with her in the changing room (and other places), which would lead to an alternate confrontation later where she's sadder about killing us (still does obviously) and would lead to her later being captured instead of killed. Perhaps give the MC Dominant and Submissive points from dialogue too which would lead to different sex encounters, one's where it determines if he or the girl leads, if he's more or less aggressive in pursuing them, etc. Stuff like that.
Anyway, it's only at v0.1, so plenty of room to grow and I hope you keep going.
Edit: Critique is for v0.3.0
Well, I do like it so far and want to see more.
A brief critique though for the BJ scene at the start.
First of all the arousal bar on the right is really slow, no matter the 'speed' I set it at. For me at least it was slow enough that I lost interest in the scene and that's not a good thing for a sex scene.
Second is that while clicking an action more than once is supposed to change the 'speed' of an action, there's no indication that it's working (beyond the character themselves moving a little faster obviously) or when you've reached the "highest" speed and it cycles back to slow. A visual indicator of the speed setting on the action button itself would help with that, perhaps pips/gems on the button that light up. More lights = faster speed?
Anyway, looking forward to more... could also use a gallery on the start page so I can enjoy the scenes without having to go through all that un-skippable dialogue I've already read again... I guess those are also critiques.
I like it so far, even if I feel frustrated by the training being more teasing than sex. Maybe add some practice "training" sessions with Vi later so players can work out their frustrations at the beginning of the game.
Speaking of expanding training... any plans to add training sessions for the Demon Queen? Perhaps a gender changed Hero?
Heck, I can even think of a plausible scenario for the latter that doesn't involve already having already beaten him: Hero is frustrated and horny, Vi says to just get changed into a girl as the Goddess didn't outlaw having sex like that. The shocked Hero asks Mars if that's even possible and he says it is, if not as easy as she's saying. It'll take some research and may have side effects even if temporary (ie sexy curse mechanic like the girls). He goes for it and then 'she' gets trained by Mars until she doesn't want to change back...
PS: I also noticed the bug where clicking on the Heart has no way to exit the new screen. Rolling back with the mouse wheel works, but I don't think that's intended.
Hmm... well I have an idea for a specific scene, mostly because I think the Witch needs more screen time, does that count?
Basically you arrive at her house at night (late night maybe?), and she invites you in because she wants more spell reagents (so she says, she may just like the taste) and starts flirting with the MC. Your first choice of the scene is to either "Let her continue" which will lead to a similar scene as the first encounter but more elaborate (fellatio, boob job, etc) and ending with getting several samples (in her mouth or on her breasts/face) and the MC leaving at Late Night. The second option is "Kiss Her" which has him grab her and proceed to do so, hard and deep kissing (intense, lots of tongue). She struggles a bit, but soon gives in and returns it. This leads to actual sex which can go into several directions with multiple options (missionary on the bed, doggy style against the wall, lotus, etc. with optional degrees of gentle or rough), cumming in or on her, etc. Afterwards she and the MC are having post-coital cuddling in the bed and she's complaining (content may vary depending on the act and if it was gentle or rough), he laughs and says she enjoyed it. She just blushes and doesn't deny it, staying silent and hiding her face. She does get her sample in the morning with a wake up blowjob. Like the elf, once unlocked this scene can be repeated.
Just a fantasy I hope to see in the game someday.
