I really liked the dialogue in this mission as well as the story. It was somewhat simple, but decent. I think that the gameplay could've been done better. There could have been a few more objects placed around the shootout area, and the enemies could have had different equipment. I like the fact that the driving part isn't just driving. There is some dialogue happening at the same time.
This mission could've been a bit longer. It would definitely benefit from a few more cutscenes (even a single cutscene before the final fight would be good). You only used 66 objectives, which is fine. I assume you didn't want to drag this mission for too long. Either way, good mission, and I would very much recommend.
Review of some sort - also, the mission crashes (mostly towards the end).
Decent, for the most part.
(About the crash)
The biggest issue is that in the 2nd Los Santos part, it tends to crash at random points (at least for me). I tried it on 2 different versions of SA. One with a limit adjuster (fastman92 limit adjuster, to be exact) and a second one without. It worked fine on the first one (I was able to play the entire mission). While it kept crashing at random points in Los Santos on the second one,.
I looked at the objectives in the in-game editor (like went to their locations and such) and played the mission afterwards, and that somehow delayed the crashes (I didn't edit anything just flew there with a jetpack). Not sure why the crashes even happen, might have something to do with the actors/cars.
(The rest of the Review)
I was also confused about who was speaking at some points (could use some names in the subtitles, but that might be just my personal preference).
Overall, the mission is decent (I mentioned that before). At some points, the mission has nice and fun visual effects, but I think that it fails at the gameplay (not that it's bad, but that it could've been done better). In short, you do the same thing just with a different thing against different enemies (this aspect can be done well, but it has to have a bigger spin on it).
I have to say that I was a bit confused about which character was speaking at the time (could use some names in the subtitles).
There is no mini map visible (due to objective 0 being in an interior while the mission is in editor mode, publishing would most likely remove that issue). It causes a bit of confusion, but nothing major, as the locations you're given are somewhat close to each other. (If you know the SA map very well, you won't get confused as much.)
