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I liked your previous games a lot, so I thought it was weird to find the nonsensical and repeated descriptions here.
Hello, I got this text on my first try:
"Traditional Bronze Flute, covered in cum, covered in cum, engraved with dwarven runes, engraved with dwarven runes, engraved with arcane runes, covered in strange slime, is a replica of an artifact made by some goddess of reproduction (35 Sp)"
The browser didn't allow my to copy the text, so I transcribed it by hand (I'm using windows and the browser is Brave).
I'm guessing that the descriptions shouldn't be repeating for the same item.
Another weird one I found:
"Elven copper amulet, covered in strange slime, inlaid with gold, shaped in a form of a huge breasts, inlaid with gold, shaped in a form of a huge penis, inlaid with silver, that looks like the one owned by a famous goddess of reproduction (11Gp)"
First the "inlaid with gold" got repeated, but the thing that was weirder to me was that firts it says the amulet has the shape of huge breasts, but then it says that it is shaped like a huge penis. I'm supposing those two statements should be mutually exclusive. And a little thing, the amulet could be inlaid with both gold and silver, but an easier way to read it would be if both things were mentioned together: "inlaid with gold and silver". I found both on the casual level.
I also found the description "looks like it is not working at all" on things that don't make sense as they don't have special effects, like "Latex Book With Nude Pictures", "Old latex helmet" or "Orcish bronze helmet".
Also, I found a typo: "feels unnerwing and disturbing" should by unnerving.
I also caught an error in a description: "Ancient Golden Handcuffs, said to be created by a apprentice of the apprentice of the %character% (57 Sp)", I found it in the vanilla level.
And finally a small remark on my part: I didn't really notice a difference between the Kinky and Perverted levels, I kinda expected new items or descriptions to appear, but that wasn't the case.
Even with all these little problems I got a lot of great items with interesting descriptions and had fun imagining them in a scene or story. Keep it going!
Sorry for the late answer, yes the area was what I had in mind. It helps me divide the play areas in the game, it's mainly for my own benefit, but it can be quite helpful to make more concrete some ideas (the image you have of the areas is a good example of this). Also, the tags are cool, I use them as tokens (money/power units) or pieces I want to represent. Nice job.
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It was a neat game, the romantic thought were fun, but as the princess was described further I started to think "What the f*ck did I bring from the dungeon?", she isn't described as much as the other characters, and she doesn't speak, so my thoughts steered towards "I brought a horrible monster who is controling my mind to my home". I'm glad the game it didn't confirm these thoughts, but I'm also upset it didn't deny them, nor explored the hot sex. Anyway, good game.
My first mission is to make a dominant subject have submissive sex, so I tried a few different aproaches, first I tried doing it with a subject that was active, but that wasn't enough for the mission, so I looked for subjects with the keyword "dominant", I found them, I made them more submissive, but they still didn't have submissive sex, wich was quite weird. I decided to go to a very dangerous place, make them submissive, pacifist and sex nimphomaniacs, but they still didn't have submissive sex. It's like the option of making them more submissive does nothing.
I even managed to get them raped, but the mission was still not complete.
Man, I really want to see the continuation of this.
Maybe there could be some "fortuitous" encounters ; ) or maybe dangerous situations you can opt out of like secret tombs that give the chance to aquire something if you solve a riddle, make the right choices or solve a puzzle; you could get some martial arts, artifacts, or a simple upgrade to your atributes.
It's just a sugestion, what you have done to this point is really cool and I would love to see what it leads to.