Interesting twist with Yume Nikki x Kard! Really enjoyed the use of the DoD music, it really helped with the overall ambience of what you're trying to do, some directions in the wooden world would be helpful lool but overall I hope to see you work on this game more cause I def see it having more potential
I loved the early bits of this dialogue, they were so simple and peaceful and honestly inspired something deep within me, however I felt the endings were a bit abrupt and needed some polishing, I also felt they borrowed way to much from the original dab on darkness ending dialogues, good job otherwise! This can turn into something amazing later on if you want to continue working on it
