I really like this demo, it grabbed my attention just right!
I quite like the premise and the characters are good! only the introduction round hit neuteral on some points but I think that's just on me because I wouldn't ask some questions, no worries
the world building is very interesting! I like your take on these themes we've heard so much before but finally it interesting by the way you handled them, changed some rules, added your own flair, it's new and works better even
the different spiecies are also cleverly designed and the immortal vs mortal spieces work good because of the way the gods work
the designs are creative and good! props to you and the others!
very glad I found this vn though Memorial Playground! these will be two games wich worlds and characters will be on my mind for a while