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Glad I could help!

If you would humour me more, I would also suggest expanding on 'interactivity' in the rooms. Most pros consider a single interactable thing in a room a sign of amateur design.

Wishing your team success!

The underlying philosophy of the monster is compelling. Its birth brought the instrument of its own destruction, and the instrument of its destruction births it. How great is that? The sword is also explicitly a symbolic phallus, with its 'stabbing' resulting in birth. Now that's good stuff right there.

Where the product falters is IMHO, is in the room descriptions. They are a little bland and do not convey the sense of death and decay the adventure is going for. Simple touches such as rust and tarnish on metals, seepage on walls, tattering of banners, the crunch of broken glass, etc. could elevate the writing, without which, the Referee has to do a bit of work to get the feel out of the adventure to the players. 

The background info conveys a good sense of putting the reader in the right mood, but only the Referee has access to that.

A good adventure, with the potential of being great.

LET'S GOOOOOOO!!!!

Thank you for your prompt response <3

Is there a bundle available that includes both Notorious and Outsiders?

Same question for physical copies.

Thank you! Bit of behind-the-scenes but I wanted to write a mission that gave players snapshots of Indian history. After that, I decided to sort of lean into the colonial aspects more.

At 4 pages, it is clean, slick and has good content - love it. Also, Grognard NPC needs to be official. 

Great stuff! Can't wait to put PCs through Tomb of Horror - An ancient tomb unearthed in the heart of the Amazon. When a CYCLOPS operative comes out running naked and insane, FIST decides it's time to send in the pros.

Thank you!

Imho the best entry in terms of tone and substance. Real solid stuff.