It's so simple and cute. I agree that there are grammar mistakes, but I feel like the whole vibe that the game gives off isn't really affected by grammar and punctuation. Anyway, I love it ^^
I noticed that your buttons are a bit off in position. It's better in full screen but still, viewers usually see your game first without full screen. I recommend anchoring it and testing out different resolutions to make sure it works with everything before releasing your game.
I hope you don't take this personally but as advice and constructive criticism to better your game in future updates :)
