That was actually really good. I especially appreciated how this story functions just fine as an introductory adventure for the unfamiliar readers that escalates while still immersing you into WoD. Bringing up songs characters themselves hear in particular scenes really sells them.
What I had problems with? Ironically, type of escalation itself when it goes from almost this nomad side-story to an epic siege scenario. Overreliance on "three not-really options with what to do before you can continue the story" also bears mentioning. I felt it slowed down the pacing past mid-point after most of the establishing is done.
Also, misspelling Epilogue cracked me up.