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I am by no means a major source for the subject, but here is my input: first off I LOVED how in depth you worked the naming process! Too many games just give you a single word with little but a base description and an image and you spend the whole game with every random person in game including the corner store clerk calling your mother "mom"! That was spot on!
And we all love a compelling story that sucks you in and keeps you reading. But let's face it, anyone interested in the game are here for the lewd content.But too many games just give a quick story intro and ram the lew without bias! So having a long introduction to set up the meat of the story is great as long as there is a drop-off from story to include a healthy, yet controlled amount of lewd. You may have gone a little long on the story introductions. Even skipping past story content in a second play took like 20 minutes to see your first boob! But once you cut in, you ran the perfect amount to ensure both story and lewd were in perfect supply.
My only MAJOR gripe, and the one that may damn your game is that the dialogue box is far too large and too bright and hinders view of the lewd content. Using H button to view content is fine for one off frame view and screenshotting. But having to use it for almost every scene is quite annoying. And very nearly enough for me to abandon all the great work you have laid thus far!
This is my first peer review in this genre of gaming so i apologize if I did not follow any protocol or unspoken rule. But I feel complete and direct feedback is the only way for anyone to know what people do or do not like. I am only about an hour into the game. So my review is based on only a portion of the content I assume