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Thank you very much for your sweet comment, I'm glad you liked it!! ☺️

Oh, man... I'm honestly starting to feel guilty for making the game so short, even though I forced myself to start small with my first vn hahahah

And you're right! She's not as harmless as she seems ;)

Hey there!

Thank you so much for playing it and for your critique! Feedback is very important to me.

Putting myself in the shoes of the player/reader, I believe I can understand what you described.

I tried to make the two characters believable, but I also gave myself full creative freedom to make them way more intense than what you would expect for socially acceptable behavior. 

Kien is a Yandere character. Sallie seems to be a person who avoids conflict (exactly as you described), but who experiences a great deception by someone she trusted and was developing a crush on. Her unexpected reaction to the truth is part of something that we also didn't know about her - she also has a dark side.

I'm sorry if you didn't like the ending. I know cliffhangers can be frustrating... I used to hate them when I was younger, until I found the charm in how they made me think of so many theories! lol

I hope you still had fun with the game! 😄

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it :)

Thank you very much, Bella!! Awesome to know that you had fun playing it! 😊

I hope you will also enjoy what's coming up in the future!

The game is finished :) 

Thanks for playing!

Hey, Manedza!

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment!!

I'm very glad you decided to play the game - even though it's a kinectic vn - and enjoyed it :')

I can totally understand your feelings. Even if I was the one writing it, I also found myself feeling frustrated about what happens. I got so attached to his character that I almost didn't want this "innocence" to be broken... lol

About your questions:

- The color palettes for both of their designs (actually for the whole game's aesthetic) were intentionally more on the darker side. I tried some other colors, but I just loved these shades of blue hair/brown eyes and green hair/pink eyes for them. In the beginning, Sallie was going to have a more vivid blue hair, along with a short haircut, but I was happier with the style she has now. Kien didn't change anything about his appearance to match hers.

- Everything he told her about himself was true.

- He enjoys different art pieces and is very good at playing cards. The frame symbolizes luck and strategy.

- I don't think so, to be honest. I wanted to keep the story short and I think it will stay that way. Unless I get a great idea in the future that makes me very sure about doing a continuation, the story ends here.

Thanks again for taking the time to write your comment and for playing! :D

What a wonderful game! 

You've done an excellent job with the art, writing, story and pacing. The narrative is very interesting and Mychael is a very well constructed character. His personality is charming and makes you wanna see how he will react based on the path the story takes. 

I really enjoyed it! 😊

But some things are better left to the imagination!! 👀

Thank you very much for playing!

Hi, Grain! 

What a sweet comment, I'm very flattered! ;_; 

Thank you so much for playing and for the beautiful feedback. I had a lot of trouble drawing these backgrounds (as I'm more used to draw characters) but i wanted to make them nice for the game ♡ 

And you have my blessing to fight him 😂 he deserves it hahaha

Hi, Terry! Thanks a lot for playing and for making the video, I will definitely check it out!

It's so nice to read that you've enjoyed the writing and the atmosphere. Receiving such a nice feedback is very rewarding!

And, well... Kien is a certified smooth operator ;)

Thank you very much, Ashe! I'm glad you liked it!

And great that you wanna play it again in portuguese - the translation is in progress and will come out soon. Não vai demorar ;)

Hi, Sage!

How cool to know that this was your first visual novel! I'm happy you enjoyed the game and even recorded a video about it. I will watch it as soon as I can! :)

Thank you very much for playing and good luck with your YT Channel!