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Wow this is really cool! The world building and atmosphere that you're building up is really engaging, and the characters, besides being really well written, also have a great sense of fragile unity, one that seems like it could break apart at any moment. The tension is amazing, and the MC's whole struggle with "something being wrong" with them is also well presented and heartfelt. Is this still continuing? 

This is absolutely amazing!! 

The number of possible outcomes is so impressive and provides a lot of cool replayability, and 5 chapters feels like a blessing. The writing is also really good, and I really like how diverse the cast of characters are. Not too many that I lose track, but enough to give a lot of different interactions and conversations. 

The characters feel so alive too, I've grown to like all of them and am especially attached to Joia (of course) and unexpectedly for me, Rhaxa? And Rohan gives me such intensely conflicted feelings of irritation that I can't help but appreciate her character all the more, even with the number of times she's stabbed my MC in the back. 

Thank you for making this! Patiently awaiting the next chapter 😊

OMGGG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REPLYING!! I honestly wasn't sure whether to expect one and definitely not so quickly
Please take your time with the story and take care of yourself as well! I and many others will definitely be here to read your amazing writing once it does get updated, good luck, and I hope you have a wonderful day 😊

This is absolutely incredible, you have such a distinct writing style, the emotions are so raw and heartfelt, and the worldbuilding so far seems superb!

Is this still being continued?