Hello, thank you very much for your comments.
I understand your position, but let me tell you that I haven't changed the central plot, but I have moved Michael and Kaoru's conflict forward, and I eliminated the scene so that it wouldn't cause discomfort since I indicated from the beginning in the comments and tags that this story wouldn't have netorare. Since Kim leaves with another without saying anything to Aoi and Yuri, that also happens to be an infidelity to which I did not want to give focus, but it is understood that it happens.
Regarding the erotic scene of the antagonists, I will keep it in mind for my future projects, since it is precisely a dilemma that I was thinking about.
I'm still new at this, “In the dark” is my second project and I'm polishing my method and focus, that's why I value every comment since it's the only way to get feedback and learn.
regards.