That was so cute! Thank you!!
Squirming Shadow
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I really love the game. It is clear that you put a huge amount of time and effort into it. Thank you so much! I don't see any mention of it in the list of errors, so I thought I would mention that the Steam achievements are not working correctly. I have played all the routes, and the in-game content reflects that, but I think I only have 2 achievements. Previously, I had more, but they disappeared. Obviously, this isn't a huge issue and doesn't make the game less fantastic. However, I thought I would let you know it is happening.
I adore this game. For the first time, I found a bug. If you play Dragan's route and select playing the flute after you fall out of the tree, either I get stuck and can't advance if I just click like normal or I get an error message if I use skip. With the error message, I was able to ignore it and then continue on, so no harm done, but I thought you might like to know. Anyway, this game is fantastic. Thank you so much for making it!
It seems like some of the pages for Valerian's route are out of order. Some pages, like when you choose who you like best, if you choose Valerian, repeat before continuing on. Maybe that is intentional. However, now I'm at the point where Noor has brought you to meet the lieutenants, and the pages seem mixed up. This didn't happen on my earlier playthroughs (months ago), Please let me know if you need more details.
I'm not the author or in anyway associated with them, but I thought I would offer a suggestion. If you are in chapter 4 and get "You are not close enough with X to select this option" for all the love interests, then you are going to get the bad end (in my experience). What I did was start again and focus on one romance path, choosing every single romantic/flirting option for that love interest. If you don't get close to at least one of the characters fairly quickly, then you aren't going to be able to avoid the bad end. I hope that helps!
I hope it helps! I think it is a little better than working on backstory or editing, since both of those can keep you from doing any new writing. Of course, they both need to be done, but I usually try to wait until I've finished a new chapter before going back to work on editing. Backstory... well, I usually try to have most of it done, but there always seems like there is more that I could do.
I think that a lot of writers get that feeling when they've been away from writing for a while. I get anxious, because I miss my characters and my stories, but at the same time, I find it hard to write. My solution is usually to write some notes about the next section I'm working on, and that often helps me get going (but not always). I hope you find what works for you. I've been thinking about this story kind of often recently, and I wish you luck in your work on it.
I think this makes a good demo in that it gives you a feel for the story and an ending, although the ending leaves enough up in the air that it makes you wonder what is _really_ going on. I've only played through Laurent's route so far, but I wanted to suggest that if the MC is supposed to understand the part in French, then there should be subtitles. The MC seems to understand, based on the comments after, but my somewhat crappy French left me a little confused about the whole thing. Anyway, thank you so much for finishing this for us. I look forward to what comes next.