Brilliant story, loved every second of it. Can't wait to see how the story continues.
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"Embark on a journey to discover your true identity, make choices that will impact the story"
At what point do we make choices that impact the story? I've been railroaded into every single thing i DON'T want to do.
Why can tell Abby that the underwear scene was a misunderstanding only to HAVE TO say i was perving a few sentences later?
I dont want to perv on abby, so why am i being forced to do so?
So this is another story where the MC can be described in 3 words
Weak
Pathetic
Liar
We are supposed to be able to connect with our MC but every "choice" is meaningless. The MC lies out of his ass to everyone without any good reason, refuses to utilize the power he has been given, submits to anyone and everyone even though HE CAN CONTROL EVERYONE,
Just another generic pile of garbage story that is clearly catered for the author.
The animations and scenes are fantastically well done but the story really lets the entire thing down. Just another disappointment to add to the list.