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omg thats actually so cool! sadly I suck at art too and jjba style is hard to match :< I'll try to give it a try tho lol

Hello! I have yet to play the game but it looks nice! however I've seen some typos in the main page(also some recomendations) , so I hope I don't come out as rude :p

So first I would recommend you to change things like "You are a detective who has just moved to a new town. You are involved in a serial killer case" to "You are a detective who has just moved to a new town and are involved in a serial killer case" do you get what I mean?  Like don't separate every sentence and just try to stick them together

Also I've seen a small typo in th MC introduction, like "She have" instead of "She has". Besides, I would recommend changing some words since in some sentences the choose of words is a bit poor

And something that also may bugs the eye is writing on the same sentence or paragraph both "He is" and "He's", maybe stick to one because it looks a bit off

The rest seems good! The main issue would be the sentences thing but overall it looks nice, so keep going! ^^

(I wanted to write this on the discord server but the link seems to be down)

frfr! If only I new coding 💔we can only wish for now tho, hopefully someone will take interest in the game and remake it!

Omg I need someone to remake this game it's been like three years since I last played it and I still miss the fun I had! There are barely any jojo fan games and Im down for anything visual novel-style

This was honestly a very heart touching game, I could relate in many parts with the MC

You did a great job and it's really original! Looking forward your next project!

Hihihi, your game is great and I really enjoy it I'm looking forward to the final game!! ❤

Bro It's pretty cute the game and I woul love if you can add Speedwagon xd I really love that character and it will be awsome if he were there. Of course this is just a sugestion, the game looks good .Keep going!

I really love the game, it was also funny a little short but very good.

This game is incredible, I really had fun with this game I hope the game come coplete soon (>'v')>  and I also recomend play it,  you can have a good experience. A really cool game uwu