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Hey, I just wanted to say that everything here so far seems really well made. I love the trippy colorful art style. It fits very well with the tone of the story and background music. The pacing feels fast and engaging compared to a lot of other vns. The overall tone does a good job portraying how lost and uncertain Ben is about his future living out a car. But I feel like this hopelessness is somewhat balenced out by the lighter conversations with the people at the party, after stepping out of his comfort zone a bit.

I'm looking forward to seeing more about Ben and his troubled past. I like the mystery you've setup with it, and it seems like there's a lot that could be unpacked there.

PS: I saw the message at the end, I really hope you can find the support and success you need to be able to improve your situation.

Omg I love Alvi!!! Definitely my fav character so far. Can't wait to see the rest of his route

Good luck on your next project. We all love you Kideshi ❤️ 

Wow, this seems really neat so far!

Very exciting!!! The character portraits look so badass. Also, love to see how much effort y'all are putting into all the ideological world building.

I’ve been absolutely loving this vn so far. Everything you’ve built feels so intentional from the world, the characters, the music, and just the overall atmosphere in general. And I like how the story has a dark ambience to it while still having uplifting and likable characters.

The world building has been awesome so far. I really like how much effort you’ve put into creating depth to the culture of the Black Colony—with the artifacts, the bedtime stories, and just everything. The anatomy and foods of this world are also really fascinating. I love how you're not afraid to design the world in a way that may seem strange or unorthodox. It creates this great sense of mystery where, as the reader, I’m always curious what I’ll discover next.

I feel like Neo, specifically, has been a really compelling character and protagonist. He always seems to be considering people's feelings about things, making sure they’re ok, and making sure to not implicate them into things they're not comfortable with. I really like how caring and perceptive he is towards the people around him—especially when they’re feeling down. It warmed my heart to see how much of an effort Neo made to get Reuben to open up (and include him in the friend group) rather than letting him drift off into loneliness and isolation. It’s so easy to fall into the trap of self-isolation, and I’ve faced it in my life quite a bit in my own life. So, I really admire how much he recognizes the importance of reaching out to people when they need it.

This VN has been such an amazing read so far. Thank you SO MUCH for making this!!!

Also wondering, is the title "Season May" symbolic of something? I’m just curious.