Yeah, this is pretty good, although MC is really getting railroaded into trusting/liking the orphan, who shines like the reddest of all the red flags, she should really know better, being that old.
Oh, and will there be a steam release?
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"In my restless dreams I see that town..."
Anyway, just wanted to say that this is really, really good, the MC is so incredibly well written, it's rare we get such a treat in a CYOA where the protagonist is an actual part of the narrative instead of just a vehicle through which we experience it. I'm looking forward to more chapters, that cliffhanger was something else!