Thanks for the comment, To answer your question I drew everything minus the backgrounds, those are Ai. Thanks for checking out the demo, I did work hard on it and am grateful for the feedback.
Im glad to know the Yuri spect drew you in, I've loved Yuri for so long and am so happy to finally get this story out there.
To cover your first concerns, I am trying to cut back during my proofreads in terms of pacing and narration. It's a bit hard to know what I should explain or leave out in the open.
My first approach was to write it as a web novel before converting it to the visual novel medium but I've found it to be a bit difficult. I'll also add better transitions!
MUSIC is so important to me! I agree it is a major aspect of creating a compelling narrative, I often watch movies/TV shows if I know it'll have a great soundtrack. In terms of it, I do want to reach out and collaborate with someone on that front, but I am not to sure on where to start.
Right now I'm finishing the rest of the drawings, but soon I'll be working on adding music sfx, etc, thanks again for the feedback and I hope you'll enjoy the full release!
