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Started reading english version... It's awesome!

But some grammar problems and parts of menu not translated. (mostly not a big deal)

Most of grammar mistakes not a problem. For instance: using "then" twice. Usually it is like: "first this, and then talk about this." OR "first this, and talk about this then.", not both.

Basic sentence structure in english: who/what - action - details.

I'd say Grammar now at 8/10

Issue with game not working is still there. Still need to permit use of .dll file after download. (explained earlier in comments)

Lastly, (for PC) going back using mouse scroll might be a good idea (similar to RenPy based projects controls)

It 's awesome... Lucky me to forget about this and now read 4 chapters in a row I guess)

And now to wait again ;-; (worth it)

Once I start the .exe app, my screen turns black for a moment, and then the app crashes.

SOLUTION (at least works for me)

File "ClearScriptV8-64.dll"

you need to find this file on disk C

Then in   "properties"  unblock it.

how to unblock: https://stackoverflow.com/questions/34400546/could-not-load-file-or-assembly-ope...

not sure what the problem is with security.

ESET Security found nothing