Wow, that VN is actually really cool. The protagonist is really funny and the fourth wall breaking is hilarious. Making fun of limitations of the engine is funny too. I can't really say that the script is great, but, like "the language" is. I nearly died when I saw "don't call me cute, im a muthafacka". There were many more moments like that, but that is my favourite. Descriptions of kisses are really hot and cute btw :3.
The artstyle is amazing, please don't change it. Music is okay, but sometimes there is no audio when there has to be, imho. What else, Terry is weird. I mean, he doesn't get as much time as others do, but I guess that will be fixed in later versions.
10/10, best visual novel ever.