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The story is very intriguing and the world building is interesting. The first build really hooked me up. 

Honestly, this is one of the examples of a good introductory build for a VN. Already affecting the reader and no boring parts. I am very excited for more.

Stygian is tickling something in my brain. I love and hate him at the same time lol.

SPOILER!!!

Since this update is the ending of the main story, I want to give my honest review on it. The first part of it really got my heart pumping(I feel like my blood pressure shoot up). I commend the writing and the flow of story.

But the ending does not give me the feeling of conclusiveness. It feels like a cliff hanger to me.  The problems of the characters were not addressed after the confrontation which is what I was waiting for for the ending (I honestly thought they died and went to paradise lol).

This is only a constructive criticism and I hope you won't take this in a bad way. I love the story and the characters (except Don Hernan) though i still haven't forgiven the mc. That's enough of me yapping.

Thank you so much for the story you made and I hope I can read more from you!

xoxo

it is definitely King's then. thanks for the info

whose scene is this? it is the second line in the gallery btw

ya i wanna bonk him in every part of his body lol

the latest chapter made me hate the MC. Ari you gotta fix this! Anywayyy~ DRAMAAAAA~

ps: sorry i just hate cheaters ಠ⁠_⁠ಠ

Pps: y'all might misinterpret my statement above. what i meant is they gotta fix this hate that i am feeling towards the MC. *eherm* redemption arc *eherm*

peace yall

does the route end here? every choice I pick results in an error.

very nice first demo, already hooked me up with the story. MORE ASH PLEASE!

altho the pov swap confuses me sometimes, i hope you add an indicator in the future.

More power to you! :D

there is one choice in Alan's route day 15 with a red exclamation mark, when he asked what does the mc do in his free time.

i see. this is very helpful thank you :)

are those the only choices that have an impact on to the plot? or the unmarked ones also affects the plot?

what does the choices with marks on them do?

my heart, my soul ʕ⁠´⁠•⁠ ⁠ᴥ⁠•̥⁠`⁠ʔ

No sweat. I understand. I thought that your choice on Day 5(Kyrex) on every route will have an impact on the story since it had on Diego's route but right now while I am writing this, I realized implementing that will be so much hassle and I understand that you are not planning on applying that mechanics in the game instead adding new contents and I totally respect that (since people are excited for other routes including myself). But regardless I still enjoy the two finished routes so far. Stay healthy and don't push yourself too hard ^⁠_⁠^

Might be spoilers....

I don't know if this has been asked beforehand but I am just curious. Are there any series of choices in Tai's route that may have led to whether the threesome will happen or not?

thnks :)

How to unlock the last two CGs?

All the love interest are hot. Sign me up.

you can't finish it yet, still WIP

Apparently the dev forgot to add a way to get a fishing rod when you burned down the forest but will be added in future updates.

Hmm...weird. He is definitely selling one in my save. And I can't think of any other way of getting one except on doing the "Outside the Law" quest and having Rohan make one for you. You might need to start a new save and don't burn the forest.

try clicking ignore

It's not abandoned. The dev just got some irl stuff. There will be an update soon😌.

I think you can buy a fishing rod from Myaun if you are locked out from getting it from "Outside the Law" quest (not sure tho haven't tested it but I bought one while I was doing the quest). As for the trout, you can get it by fishing at the river.

Have you tried picking Myaun?

The end of build 2 was amazing and I am craving for more. The VN is very well written since build 1. Keep up the good work.😁

*Me waiting for the next build...

This happens when I start a new game.

Oh that cg! I already played through that part but it seems like it didn't show up in the gallery. It may just be a bug. Thank you😁

How do I unlock this cg? Is it even possible to unlock? Its the first in the third row of "Memories of the Journey"

*Blurring to avoid spoilers:3

Yes

You need to go to your house in the forest around 20:00 to 4:00.

Thank you so much

Is that the area where a ratkin is stuck and you have to pull the tail?

Could someone please help me. I couldnt seem to find where the Ratkin's Blockade is.