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Yeah, sorry about the AI thing i apologise I removed it from my comment now heh, there is one thing tho you will give us a happy end right?… pot roast us, BBQ us, slow burn us all you like but please at least give us a happy end. most people’s hearts here can’t bear to see an even sadder Felix :<. like bro cried/had a traumatic flashback 3 times in one day! and still it is chapter1! oh! That reminds me how many chapters are you planning to make? you don’t have to answer that if you aren’t able to I am just curious. anyway good luck with your finals! remember to not overload on coffee! speaking from experience here-

I want to start off by saying this. Is. Fudging. AMAZING! One of the best VN games I played I don’t usually make accounts or leave comments but this one deserves it. And I made one especially to thank you. I love the story of Felix and I have some suggestions, before I tell them I wanna say these are my suggestions and opinions and views you can use them how ever ya like. I have a BA (Hons) in Drama and Film and see great potential. here are my suggestions:

1. An Antagonist!, someone who might harm Felix this will complicate the story making it more interesting! the antagonist could be someone from Felix’s past who knows Felix’s secrete and could blackmail Felix or manipulate Felix and this is where the datable characters come in who will try to protect Felix from the antagonist, this can also be in reverse where felix protects his datable partner from there antagonist maybe there’s could be a toxic ex, manipulative parents, bad friends etc.

Before I move on I realised as am typing this I might use the term “datable character” a lot so from now on am gonna use the white albino fox “Aka” as a replacement this will save me time and I love him he is so cute omg! in my opinion aka route is canon you can’t change my mind!

1. Manipulation and Blackmail!, this is a bit of a continuation of the antagonist thing, you might ask why would the antagonist try to harm Felix or aka? Well, it could be for many things, homophobia, OR could be a psycho who is also gay but very possessive who could abuse Felix or aka and doesn’t want the two to be together. This could be a major challenge for the potential mates! Who said love was easy?

2. Alone moments!, this could be getting stuck in a room together for a few hours and having a heart to heart or this could also be like Felix passing out as he would have a traumatic flashback and Aka takes us to his room and since he can’t find a blanket aka hugs us tightly to try and keep Felix warm using his thicc fur these could be such cute moments together.

3. Special moments + nsfw: since this is an institute where sports are very important the character Felix dates should have special moments based on their sports for example aka and Felix are alone, aka makes great archery shorts while Felix is struggling with it aka notices this and gets really close. aka wouldn’t notice much but! Felix would be freaking out and blushing while Aka teaches him to shoot better. The nsfw thing could be that Aka’s lower area is touching against Felix’s behind aka doesn’t notice it but again Felix is freaking out and blushing A LOT. This could be similar for Thomas teaching him how to use his sword better etc.

4. KISSING!, the best part and where this all climaxes the kiss should be very VERY special this could happen when Aka and Felix both confess their feelings for one another. They will be alone under the moonlight and that kiss should be so long it is a making-out session hugging, kissing cuddling etc when they confess, it should start with them both being honest about how they feel Felix’s past could be told to Aka and Aka’s’s past to Felix both console each other look each other in the eyes blushing heavily and then kissssssss.

again mate these are my views/opinions/suggestions. I could tell more as the story progresses if you would like. You can use these as you like, tweak with em, change em or not use em at all this game is a gift your making for us and your well-being comes first no need to rush something or feel pressured to change something I love how this game is going I am sure you have plans already that will just blow us away but this is just my way of helping.

Bonus suggestion: Patreon bro you will be rich and be able to maybe and hopefully do this full-time in the future, you have a lot of potential pals!

Lots of love from france thanks for making this beautiful game and making me simp for aka. Anyway, I’ll bid farewell now!

BAIBAI!!!!!!!!!

-Theo_Beano

ps. sorry if this is choppy english isn’t my first language and I had to revise this text so many times to the point it at one point became a battle to read, I didn’t wanna sound too much of a fan boy am in my 20s an still act like a kid heh anyway bai!

Nsfw themes for the datable characters can make it more entertaining but I feel most people will find what I like to call “wholesome nsfw” more fun like the example the above mate gave of felix finding his love interest naked in the shower, or romantic cuddles could also be a part of wholesome nsfw, biting and certain sounds yknow make it feel alive by adding passion. I know that sort of stuff if drawn can make it easily 18+ but when felix describes it holding his lover in his arms and feeling his heart beat getting faster as he is puuring and enjoying the moment of pure love will surely make it satisfying to alot of people even the pure horn dogs