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Damn, it's just awful... Thanks to the developers for making more content for third-party Patreon characters, for which they were paid, and the main ones were flushed down the toilet ... (with the exception of Carl and Leo). The content for such characters as T.J., Flynn and Jenna is half the size of the rest. It seems that after Karl, developers wanted to quit the project as soon as possible. I am especially offended by the lynx, I really liked him, and compared to Karl and Leo, his content is very meager, and there is only one ending with him. - What the hell!? I thought there would be at least some romantic line with T.J., but in the end, Chase remains just a friend to him.

I give this novel 5/10 for destroying expectations...

I agree with the comment below.  A pair of a bull and a wolf looks especially ridiculous.
I'm wondering, how such a huge bull's dong fits in such a small wolf?! Don't think Alex feels anything but pain... In my opinion, he does not suit the bull as a couple...

Beware of spoilers.

Most likely, tomatoes will fly in my face for this opinion, but I will still speak out.It will be about Tate, or rather about his obsessive nature towards the main character and how much he himself is an asshole.

The main character, in order to help Tate, even takes a desperate step by giving a stranger a blowjob, and argues with the director of the academy, taking on the risks of being kicked out of school, and how does Tate thank him for this!? – He constantly whines and insults the snow leopard if he does not spend time with him. And so it will be the whole route, he will scold MC for deciding to spend time with others (for example, with Merina and Oliver), and not with him, he will constantly impose his thoughts on him and criticize him for walking with a mouse and a fox, and not with him. The MC has known him for only 1-2 days and is not obliged to give all his time only to him. There is no such obsession in the route of Dallan or Aiden, they do not treat the protagonist in such a way as if he owes them something.

While I was reading, I just want to tell Tate:
- You and I have known each other for three days, what kind of friends are we?! I don't have to give all my time just to you, fuck off from me and let me spend time with whoever I want!

However, this is a matter of taste, this can actually be forgiven by making a reference to a neutral route.

But Tate's most despicable act at the end of the update infuriated me even more.
This cat deliberately throws the MC to death, and he did not even try to do something to save him, at least to call for help after teleportation, for example. Even if Tate had lost almost all of his mana, he could have called for help by teleporting to the academy, or at least to the nearest payphone to call the academy. However, he did not do this and left the MC to certain death, because he was offended, like a small child who was not given enough attention. And how convenient that after that the protagonist forgets all the events and does not blame Tate for what he did.

I would also like to say about the demon, which was completely forgotten in this update. He spent an unknown amount of time in prison, but all he does is watch Netflix in the head of the MC - seriously!? At the end of the game, if you follow Tate, in order to save the MC from death, the demon teleports his clothes with an amulet, BUT previously he could not do this for some reason, - why?

I hope the author will not delete my comment. I don't think Tate is a bad and terrible character, I just expressed aspects I didn't like about him.

Hi, why is Translator3000 not working in this visual novel?

Thank you, everything works fine (sorry for the long answer, I hardly sit here)

"Here "- where exactly? what are you speaking about?

So it is, when I select the Russian language in the settings, this happens.

Why the translation into Russian does not work?

Дождались, но в целом ошибки простительны, ибо и сам автор не очень хорош в орфографии и тоже допускает их)

DALLAN I LOVE YOU!!!

Great! It remains to wait for the translation into Russian!

roger-roger

 when will the update with Dallas be made publicly available?