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What are some visual refs of the angels? 

Cause personally ive ended up thinking they look similar to the dolls from Gira Gira

*well found out how to post images smh

Is this not Val?

*I wanted to add screenshots to help with finding where the typos are but itch wont let me >:(

5th page after choosing 'how you died the first time' theres code errors involving Val's pronouns

When talking with Klaus about how he met Val, Val's pronouns default to they/them (Val is set to male in my game) in some of the sentences

If i select the third option ("Im just asking questions. Dont read into it.") it brings up an error 

Last page before end of what you currently have for chapt4 has floating code text $vTheyd

bruuuuuh cliffhanger nooooo

smh im stuck between wanting to romance Halson or Roman, the agony of choices

ur story*

Also i think i found a bug? Is it supposed to drop Wylder's opinion of you by -50% if you take her hand? It does the same with the [FLIRT] option too
Not taking her hand doesnt change her opinion
Is it supposed to be the other way around?

I will look forward to the day of an update

I need more of that dumbass Val

You open to another beta tester? I dont mind helping out and proofreading since im weird about catching grammatical errors lol

Can i request that you add settings? Mostly like font size as its a bit difficult for me to read
And also adding some opacity to the sidebar buttons as the font color blends too much into the background

For some feedback: I only gotten to where you name the lil kitty cat but i have noticed some typo's 
The good ole classic putting "Your" instead of "You're" and Camila's name being misspelled in one instance
So would be good to reread and nab those (￣▽￣)ゞ
Edit: Spoilers- Some more typos caught

In the start of chapter 2 when the kittycat is mentioned theres a good amount of grammatical errors

Edit2: Okay Chapt3 has a LOT of typos and errors

Nice chill idle game

Def would need some more content and things to do

Also you should add some upgrades for the king himself, like queue your king to attack armies + some upgrades for his movement speed

Can i suggest making the upgrades increase cost not go into decimals? Especially since the upgrades only give a whole number as a buff

i dont like being stuck with decimals lmao

Do you plan/or could plan some classes/content centered around ranged pcs? The Gallant fight was a pain in the ass and disappointed i could pr much only use one strat to take them down (The one you mentioned in the comments)

But i guess it is the point of the game (i think) for it to be centered around rerolling and doing diff things

Some bugs i found

After going with Grenn to the Selky Pint i cant continue down that quest as the button is grayed out. 
It might because its not implemented yet (If so, maybe add a note for it?) but just wanted to bring it up as when you go to find the Countess' mansion the Selky Pint button takes you to the page to find Countess' mansion.

despite that, loving this so far

Typos galor. But still excited to see more of this.

Also i hear you can indeed romance Eirik? im not into incest part buuuuut

dark content to make my soft kind baby boy baby mc to suffer? potentially abusive romance route to bully my anxious mc boy? my dumbass naive mc actually managing to gain his love?

I look forward to this being completed

Need any help fixing grammar tho? I like this so i dont mind giving some help