Nice work! I like this from the first read. Seems highly game-able, meaning I think I could run this after reading it through once. One small thing: the NPC Hadriel, is referred as "she" until the last sentence where it changes to "he".
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I ran this adventure using Troika! and the Acid Death Fantasy setting. The hook was a sultan hired the party to investigate the site of ancient power and bring back any anything that could give him the upper hand over the other sultans. I embellished some of the NPC's but, otherwise ran it just as written and we had fun with it, fitting it into a 4 hour convention style time slot.
This was very fun to run. The set up and setting are great and very much work. Love the writing. The danger was very easy to telegraph with what the writer gives you. Because the rolls went the way they did, it did not really function as a funnel. They made some safe choices and just didn’t encounter much deadly opposition until finding 2 longfolk towards the end. We only had 3 deaths out of 12 zeros. Nevertheless, the players enjoyed exploring this unique location.