Thank you very much.
I hope that I can improve in the areas needed, but, as I have advised within TheIcehouse, I am stepping back for a while to learn and understand how to do things better.
Hexenwerk, thank you so much for your posiitve critique.
Part of your confusion was probably an indirect success of the plot within the experience.
As I have mentioned above in my response to Simon, I am still learning, as you are aware, and would hope that in any future work I will consider more the experience of the player and shape the resulting work into a better form.
Thank you again for your support and encouragement.
Thank you so much for your creative comments. As you know, I am still at the beginning of my journey in constructing these type of experiences.
I do not think that I can genuinely call them games, so perhaps "experience" is the more correct terminology. I also find that I am getting a bit frustrated during the process with my lack of experience, and missing useful aspects, such as considering the length of time a text is displayed.
As you know I had to finish this in a bit of a rush at the end, which I feel shows in some of your critique.
Again thank you for your support and encouragement.