English is a hard language, and grammar is even harder. Don't beat yourself up over it OP.
Trin
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I am trying to be as forgiving as possible just because I am aware that this isn't done by a professional team, I am always more forgiving of indie teams, but....good lord.
Grammar mistakes? Okay, I can look past that, lots of text in the whole thing, can't check everything, got it.
But the dialogue?? Holy mother, I literally struggle with socializing and even I could tell you nobody talks like this. The amount of times somebody will say something that requires a more complex answer and Walter just answers with "Oh, alright! / Okay!" is genuinely infuriating.
Conversation in general is lackluster. Every other line is literally just "Hey!" / "Hey!" / "How are you?" / "I'm fine." / "Me too." / "Okay!"
Lastly, the amount of sounds made by everyone is just weird. What kind of sound even is 'Haah'?? What is that. Is Walter just constantly yawning? Is it supposed to be a huff? Why can't you just describe it instead of putting it into the already barely there dialogue.