I'm glad you replied to me. Regarding the sense of separation, for example, from the time Maria reached level 30 to the time she recovered her mentality, her participation in the 3p incident and the wingman incident or Hana's incident all felt abrupt. Comparatively, there was also the period when Android was searching for herself and the other plots she participated in. Regarding this point, the setting of the plot of Ashley and the twins is very reasonable. Although the restrictions on conditions make people depressed, the linear story is more reasonable and comfortable. In addition, in some plots involving multiple heroines, the personality change of one of the heroines, such as the twins attending a birthday party before they reconciled, this sudden change is also a bit uncomfortable. Regarding this point, you may need to re-sort the plot to sort them out, which is undoubtedly a time-consuming and laborious task. Now the story is still developing, and you can do it when you feel you are ready or in your free time. Take care of yourself and look forward to your next update.
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