Great points about improving the dungeons! Some interesting decorations would be a good next step. Special decorations associated with the entrances could make the entrances easier to locate, as well.
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Impressive work as always! I especially like the new enemies, including the rock monster and the flying orange puffball with teeth! :D
Tale ID: A78-6HR
I completed the tale in 38 minutes, which was a good length for having 3 available dungeons and two towns! I also went to two dungeons to get enough gold to buy the library, but it was cool that another dungeon existed, so the "Continue Tale" option at the end was enticing! Very good design!
The introductory town does feel a little stuck to the right side of the screen at the beginning. I wonder if giving towns slightly more space on the edges might help in some cases?
I also really like the new variety of overworld music! The scrolling text at the beginning was really cool, too, and I was hoping for a little more scrolling text at the end when the heroine bought the library. But the text spoken by the building seller was sufficient for the tale.
5/5 for appropriate fun, variety, and interesting places, music, and art for the length of game!