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Sorry if this has already been addressed in someone else's comment, but in the "prologue" if you say you also like rock music to Cato, he stops having a face. 
There are also a few spelling/grammar errors in the English version-- nothing that can't be interpreted, but at times, it can make things a little hard to read. It's not a problem to be fixed, per se, but if you were looking for proofreaders I'd be glad to put anything google doc, or something along those lines, and go over it for you.

I really would love to play the whole thing, but I cannot (despite looking up guides and reading previous comments you've written to people who've had issues with it) make it past Muggy's follow the audio bit.
I can only get it to end in death, despite using the arrow keys and having fully functional headphones.

If anyone else who's had issues could reply with what worked for them, I'd greatly appreciate it :>

Hey! super excited to be reading through chapter 8- but one mild thing I noticed near the start of the chapter (or at least, near the start of 8A; with an MC that utilizes fire magic) was that the options for practicing your weapons are a bit wonky.
Opting for archery practice ends up displaying the text that implies the MC was practicing defensive work. While choosing to practice defense leads to text that says the MC practiced archery.

Haunting. And absolutely mesmerizing. Although I hope this is updated at some point, I know what has been posted already will stay in my head for a long time to come. 

Submitted! Hopefully the form gives you the information you're looking for :>

This is a great demo! The writing is great and the background art really caught my eye. 

Quick question though; is there a place/form to report dialogue bugs? There seems to be a glitch where Jack (with him intentionally being the selected character- and his image is the one used for the sprite) is referred to with she/her pronouns in multiple scenes

I'm a sucker for fantasy horror settings.
The descriptions of the Algid's less than human form were fantastic! and made me cringe in terror multiple times. Plus, it's really rare to see trans-representation in these sorts of stories.

Overall, I'm in love with the concept and I hope to stay up to date on any updates!

I cannot express how much I'm in love with this concept. I was so thrilled so see the project is still in the works and hasn't been abandoned. 
Keep up the good work at your own pace!