I loved this as short story. Good writing, graphics and music. It had everything I needed for a VN. Honestly, this was close to a fantasy I had many years ago, and seeing something like it in this form really warmed my heart. If there were ever a squeal or something to expand the story, I'd definitely dive in.
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Looking forward to the story continuing. You've piqued my curiosity.
The journal's a nice feature. It gives an extra something outside the story. Aside from other points already mentioned, if I had one critique, it'd be the sound effects paired with the characters' reactions. They're a little...distracting, for me, at least.
But, I'm looking forward to more with the revamps you have underway.