Overall this is definitely a really good demo. The art style is really great, the character design is top tier, and the voices really suit the characters. My only real complaint is that it would've been better if you'd fully implemented the battle instead of just cutting to the aftermath and told us to just imagine an epic fight scene. You know, show don't tell.
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I think the biggest problem is that since Maccon is no longer a student he's only gonna get half the screentime all the other characters in his own route are gonna have, since his appearances will be mostly limited to after-school scenes. He might get a few scenes during school but most if not all of them will likely just be him checking up on David and almost immediately running off to work.