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This is awesome

The new chapter was great, Azarias point view was awesome and makes me bad for her. My poor oracle is just trying to learn how to accept the love and comfort without the fear and doubt there use to, so I'm all for fighting for azaria.

this update is amazing, their interactions hit so hard, it will be great to see what happened on both sides.  

I like this alot, the demo is great. The ros are writen quite well seeing how im stuck between the follower, rival and the writer. Not exactly sure who I will go with for the first play through. Also really wanting to throw hands with jade and the family. Not sure if you plan on adding something like that but definitely would fight jade given the choice.

I love this game, im quite honestly not sure how i missed it when i go through to check for anynew interactives, Ashley's character is both frustrating and amusing and I'm looking forward to being able continue the story while romancing the vampire. I also did notice some moments it doesn't list the proper pronouns, such as when choosing a female Charlie it listed them as male in the journal entry. Ashley also had that issue with one of the choices when they come to you during lunch and you decide what to choose to piss off Alison, with the last 2 options describing her as a male. Aside from the couple bugs I think the story is great and the characters were amazing. I wish you the best going forward 

The 4th chapter was great, and i loved the new interactions with Azaria, im still stuck with not knowing what demon form to go with in the future chapters, I love the bird and butterfly's. But the idea of being a long extinct bull dog fire lion Is also amazing. I can't wait to see how the future chapters go since I'm not sure how a fight would go with the butterfly or the birds, but I'm certain that they could lead to absolutely adorable interactions with the love interests. I wish you the best going forward and hope you enjoy and have fun writing the story as much as I have when I read this story.

this is amazing, the dialogue between the two is gut-wrenching and I can't get enough of it, the only thing I'm hoping is there's a good ending where these 2 love each other 

I love this so much but that cliffhanger hurts. I can't wait to have more interaction with Dani

I like this a lot, while there are some spelling issues, the characters are great and i find myself unsure about who I should romance.  I look forward to future updates and wish you the best going forward

the start so far is amazing, I wasn't expecting it to end so quickly, but I can't wait to see how it goes in the future, and I hope we get to customize our character's more unnatural traits and perhaps get reactions from the romance options to them, but I do understand that might be hard to code. otherwise, I think this is great and has amazing potential, and wish you the best going forward

is this still being worked on?

chapter 2 is pretty great, love the character interactions can't wait to see what comes next and wish you the best

I like this interactive a lot, the characters are interesting, and I can't wait to see future interactions with them

this was great, the writing and story are amazing and I'm highly looking forward to hopefully being able to use the lumberjack background in combat, Oswin has great interactions and leaves you wising to learn more and to find the reason to his changes, and Zahn has a great personality, that's sweet and bubbles with kindness. both of their stories are gut-wrenching and it's great. I can't wait to see what future chapters hold and wish you the best going forward. (I also wanted to say I'm sorry to hear about Shadow, the interactions in the story with him were amazing. I loved every moment that included him and its never easy to lose someone close. i wanted to offer my condolences and just wanted to say to take your time, take care of yourself, and not to press yourself into doing more then you are comfortable with

I like this a lot, the story is enticing, and I'm unsure if this is still being worked on but if it is i can't wait to see what future chapters bring.

i find this to be very interesting and written quite well, i can't wait to see what future chapter's may bring

this was great, that cliffhanger hurt, and I can't wait for future chapters and more of rowans entire personality

this is amazing, there so much to it and so many details for your character. the timers do add some panic for me, but it also presses me to look for what is important to remember. I look forward to future chapters

this is very good and interesting, I can't wait to read future chapters

I like this a lot, the writing is really good, and the interactions are great. my favorite character so far is Azaria, I can't wait for future chapters and wish you the best going forward.

hey, I just wanted to say I really like your Lightning Thief interactive. I'm sorry you have to deal with all the people giving hate for it. I'm excited to see future chapters and hopefully the other books. while I love the books it is nice to be able to do your own character design and your interactive has done just that. I wish you the best of luck in the future. (Also, I'm sorry if you didn't want comments on it, I just wanted to give support for an amazing project)